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Re: Troubadour
Thanks for the review! I agree about the flow and where everything should go, it felt somewhat awkward even when I read it and had to turn it in. Perhaps ...
Jun 20, 2010 -
Re: A Homage
Yeah, the flow of the poem is kinda ... weird. I do agree. Lol. This was originally intended as a homage piece, or a poem to praise cats, but it ...
Jun 5, 2010 -
Re: that rhyme that bound your feet to the wall.stuck vertically
Love this. Especially how the ending doesn't rhyme, since it ties up the entire poem nicely.
Jun 1, 2010