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Beautifully written poem. I don't know much about the context or cultural importance of the piece but I can see the imagery being created. I like the way you've explored ...

Thank you for your thorough review. It's part of a wider universe centred around Yasuke, an african samurai. Massacre is insight into China's Great Leap in the 50's which led ...

Thank you for your review! The brackets are there just in case people get even more lost lol. The series is pretty spiritual and cosmic so Yasuke seems to be ...

thank you so much mate! I will be post the entire Yasuke arc. I will take everything you said onboard. Again, thank you!

Use 'my' more or specific feelings for example: Instead of 'I felt cold' you'd say 'my cheek felt a frozen breeze slice past it'. So more specific and without using ...

Thank you so much for your detailed review. Have a good one!

Thank you so much for your detailed review. Have a good one!

Thank you mate!

Noticed and truly noted, thank you so much for your review Stellarjay! Have a good day too!

Here to give you a review: Pros: Punctuation is clear and concise and the structure is on point. It is very cool that you drew inspiration from an image to ...