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Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 1.1)
Hey, I'm back for the first chapter! :D I really enjoyed the prologue, so I'm excited to see where this goes. When he spoke, a white mist like exhaling into ...
Sep 1, 2020 -
Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Prologue)
Hey there! I've been wanting to read this story for so long because the title seemed very intriguing, and what better time than review month? :D I skimmed though the ...
Sep 1, 2020 -
Re: The Sidworuld: Chapter 1 (Draft)
Hey there! I saw this in the Green Room and decided to check it out. Welcome to YWS! :D If you ever have any questions, feel free to ask. I ...
Aug 18, 2020 -
Re: Part 1 - LA
Hey there! I saw this in the Green Room and decided to help it out! :D The other reviewer pointed out a lot of what I saw, so I won't ...
Aug 17, 2020 -
Re: America Gone - Chapter Eight
Yay, another chapter! :D Ooh, so this chapter was definitely interesting. I think you do a really good job with the history aspect of things and setting the mood of ...
Aug 16, 2020 -
Re: Gray Daze, Chapter Three - Lemon-Yellow Leaves,Pt.1
Yay, another chapter! I also love the name of this chapter :D Ooh, another perspective! I think you did a nice job with this chapter; it wasn't too fast paced ...
Aug 15, 2020 -
Re: Gotham v. Joker, 1894 (Chapter Five)
Yay, another chapter! :D I think this has to be my favourite chapter so far because not of it felt rushed; it was mainly backstory and emotions, and I really ...
Aug 14, 2020 -
Re: America Gone - Six and Seven
Hey there! I'm back for your next chapters :D I think the characters are coming more alive! I do feel that Austin and Emma could be characterized more, as I ...
Aug 13, 2020 -
Re: Gray Daze, Chapter Two; Back to School
Hey there! I'm back for the next chapter :D I might have forgotten stuff from the previous chapters since it's been awhile, so forgive me if I say anything stupid ...
Aug 12, 2020 -
Re: Gotham v. Joker, 1894 (Chapter Four) [Extended]
Hey there, I'm back for another review! :D So the action seems to be progressing pretty quickly! I feel like in every chapter, another thing starts to go wrong xD ...
Aug 11, 2020 -
Re: long drive (part 1)
Hey there! I saw this in the Green Room and decided to check it out :D I haven't watched the anime; just wanted to put that out there in case ...
Aug 11, 2020 -
Re: The Rage (Chapter 4: Part 1)
Yay, another chapter! :D Ooh, as expected, this is another well-written chapter! I was very engaged in the characters. You describe them so well and are really good at "showing, ...
Aug 10, 2020 -
Re: feelings of music
Hey there! I love the topic you chose for this poem, so I decided to check it out! You said you included song titles in here which is really unique! ...
Aug 10, 2020 -
Re: Gotham v. Joker, 1894 (Chapter Three) [Revised]
Hey there! I decided to check out the next chapter :D This was another good chapter! You definitely have an established plot that keeps the reader engaged throughout. Your grammar ...
Aug 10, 2020 -
Re: Gotham v. Joker, 1894 (Chapter One) [Revamped]
Hey there! I'm not quite familiar with Joker stuff, but I decided to stop by and leave a review :D This will be rather short as this chapter is. I ...
Aug 9, 2020
