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Re: It Is Coming...
Hey there! I decided to stop by and leave a quick review for you :D Okay, I love this. I wasn't really sure what to expect going into this, but ...
Sep 9, 2020 -
Re: camping (part 2)
Hey there MomoandAppa! I'm here to review this very cute poem. After reading some of your poems, I've come to love your style of writing poetry. It's cute, fun, and ...
Sep 8, 2020 -
Re: America Gone - Chapters Ten and Eleven
Hey there! I'm finally getting around to read the next chapter xD I'm going to use a review template for the checklist challenge First Impressions Ooh, so things are definitely ...
Sep 8, 2020 -
Re: Usted es un vaquero loco: Costa Rican Cowboy
Hey there! I'm sorry to dig up such an old piece, but I'm doing it for the Checklist Challenge xD I'll point out some things I noticed and then conclude ...
Sep 7, 2020 -
Re: The Writing Mood
Hey there! I'm here courtesy of RevMo :D I love how relatable this piece is. It's almost humourous in a way. I loved seeing your approach on writer's block, or ...
Sep 6, 2020 -
Re: Second star to the right
Hey there, MoonIris! :D I'm here to review this courtesy of RevMo! I love the simplicity of this poem. It fits a whole lot in such simple and beautiful imagery, ...
Sep 6, 2020 -
Re: The Rage (Chapter 5: Part 1)
Hey hey, I'm finally back for the next chapter!! :D His long-legged strides looked cool and casual. His dark hair was styled and shining in the moonlight. He’d never specifically ...
Sep 5, 2020 -
Re: Seashore memories
Hello there, IcyFlame! :D I'm here to review this because of the checklist challenge. I'm just going to get right into this! I really love this poem. It's short but ...
Sep 5, 2020 -
Re: Drowning in paper
Hey there! First of all, welcome to YWS! :D I love how you have already posted two poems after joining just two days ago
Sep 5, 2020 -
Re: sand
Hey there, MomoandAppa! I'm finally here as requested :D I skimmed through the other reviews, so I'll try not to repeat anything someone has already said! This poem gives me ...
Sep 5, 2020 -
Re: I wish better was a color
Hey Tuckster, I'm (finally) here as requested! :D So I've read ShadowVyper's review and agree with everything in it, so I'll try not to repeat anything unless I just forget ...
Sep 4, 2020 -
Re: Chronicles of Valarian 5: Into the Storm
Hey you! :D I'm really liking this story so far, so here I am to review another one of your chapters! I'm going to point out things I notice along ...
Aug 30, 2020 -
Re: America Gone - Chapter Nine
Finally getting around to reviewing this xD I've seen your wall posts and such on how much thinking and planning you've put into this, and it's pretty amazing. The way ...
Aug 29, 2020 -
Re: Ocean Breaths
Hey there! I saw this cool piece in the Green Room and decided to check it out :D Ooh, I love the imagery of this piece. It's so real, if ...
Aug 26, 2020 -
Re: Gotham v. Joker, 1894 (Chapter Six)
Hey hey! I'm back for the next chapter! Ooh, so we are introduced to some more characters! I really like Tim's personality and the way you characterized him. I know ...
Aug 25, 2020
