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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Realistic Re: Redeamed Chapter one 2.2

    Hey there! I noticed this has been in the Green Room for a long time, so I decided to help nudge it out for you! ^_^ I haven't read any ...

    Jun 15, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Just Imagine

    Hey there! :) I saw this piece in the literary section and wanted to leave a review for you. But first of all, welcome to YWS! ^_^ If you ever ...

    Jun 14, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 12.2]

    HOW DOES ONE DO AN INTRODUCTION FOR A REVIEW Any exposed skin was slathered in grit and grime—playing the facade of an industrial worker. Looks like he's preparing to be ...

    Jun 14, 2021
  • Art » Fantasy, General Re: Whimsical Wisps

    NEW STORY FROM YOU omg I'm excited and I'll just get right into it :) The sky is an ocean, the twinkle of its waves reflecting the lights of the ...

    Jun 13, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 12.1]

    HEYP I'M BACK :) She suspected his attention was directed to her and her sister just as hers was to him. Ooh so now she notices too something suspicious about ...

    Jun 12, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 11.2]

    Hey there, I'm back for the next chapter ^_^ Warmth and chatter spilled from the tavern. Aw, I love how you opened this chapter! I'm hoping that maybe the characters ...

    Jun 10, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 11.1]

    She was back in Styrka. AN I'M BACK FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!! :D Ooh, it looks like we are getting more hints about Rieka's past; I'm curious as to why ...

    Jun 10, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 10]

    HEY HEY I'M BACK, and I'll just get right into it ^_^ Ren said, pulling his horse away from the swaying bridge that linked the two cliffs. With the wind ...

    Jun 9, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 9.2]

    HEY HEY I AM BACK :D They were delicate and few, their leaves limp under the setting sun. A far cry from the abundant fields of wheat and grapes they ...

    Jun 7, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 9.1]

    HELLO :) can't wait to get into this chapter!! Scrubbing a hand over his face, Kai said, “What are you doing?” Do people scrub a hand over their faces? I ...

    Jun 7, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 8]

    HELLO I'M BACK :) The plan was simple. Complete the ‘prophecy’ and gain the coin promised, killing the girl along the way. Ah, yep, I thought he was going to ...

    Jun 6, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: The Paper Boat

    HELLO HELLO! ^_^ This story caught my eye, and I would love to leave you a review :) I lightly skimmed through the other wonderful reviews you have gotten, so ...

    Jun 5, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 7]

    HELLOOOOOO :) I can't wait to read this chapter! ^_^ But it was a start, she told herself as she tied on leather boots that felt foreign upon her feet. ...

    Jun 3, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Awakening Chapter 6: Shadow

    AHHHHH NEW CHAPTER :'))) With a twist of his head Blake examined at the analog clock atop the nearby nightstand. I personally think it sounds better to leave out the ...

    Jun 2, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 6]

    AHHHHHHH HIIII I'M BACKK Flitting laughter and tinkling glasses filled the hall, blending with the gentle lute the musician strummed, hidden in the shadows. The ballroom was bedecked in ribbons ...

    Jun 1, 2021


Defeat has its lessons as well as victory.
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