starlinks

A couple of things: 1. I imagine that you are trying to say "it is" instead of "its"? So try using "it's" instead of "its". (Confusing, I know.) Also, it's ...

I really like your use of imagery (senses of touch, sight, etc.), but you might need a stronger attention grabber. It's good to add some conversation and stuff, but it ...

I really like this poem and its originality! It brings family dinner alive, and it's a very relatable (yet seldom written) topic that leaps right off the page. I especially ...

I love this! Although this might be a bit confusing at times, it's very satisfying in the end when I figured what you were trying to convey. :) Definitely didn't ...

I really like this poem, particularly the imagery you created in my mind with the powerful words. This is a very nice ode, and the emotions are conveyed just right. ...