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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Existentialism

    Thank you and you're welcome.

    Oct 28, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Good

    Good beat and rythym. Flowing. Emotion well expressed. Not enough details. Readers want lots of details to keep them interested. We pretty much want a learning experience other than school.

    Jan 31, 2008
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Fantasy Reporter

    Those were very funny. I'm not a video game fanatic, so I don't know much about Eragon or Zelda, but you made the stories very original and creative. Good job.

    Jan 31, 2008


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