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  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Horror Re: How To Kill Your Dragon [Ch. XVIII, Nine] - Part I

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    Hey! love your chapter (i haven't read your others, but this makes me want to...) Anyways, here's a review! how your chapter glowed! :D Your opening is gripping! You drop ...

    Feb 15
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A God Named Sin | Chapter 2 Continued + Chapter 3

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    hey! i love ur chapter. this makes me want to read the others... anyways: How this piece glowed! =D -Your tension control is genuinely impressive! This chapter keeps a steady, ...

    Feb 14
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: 4. The First Class (Conqueror Rising)

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    hey! love your piece! here's a review =) 🌟 how this piece absolutely glowed 1. cyrus’s entrance is genuinely iconic XD you introduce him with chaotic energy but also warmth, ...

    Feb 14
  • Short Story » Romantic, Science Fiction Re: The Boy and the Beast PART 1

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    heyyy! love your book :) here's a review: 🌟 how your piece glowed =D 1. Your sensory detail is absolutely amazing the castle, the dining hall, the bedroom — all ...

    Feb 14
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Agents of Time: Chapter One; The Mansion

    heyyyy! I love where your story's going! here's a review

    Feb 10
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: Utopia

    Hellooooo! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method! Alrighty then :) let's get to it- Top Graham Cracker – What I Know Okay so Utopia is basically the story of ...

    Feb 9


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