stargazer9927

Can I just say I love your writing. I follow a lot of people (well at least I used to) and I can honestly say out of all of them ...

Well I don't really have much of a review for this, but I think you did a great job with emotion and I can feel you speak from personal experience. ...

This is very powerful for how short it is. You did a great job with the rhyming sceme and none of it seemed force, which is something I find with ...

Well done! I've read a few things on this subject and I've hated them all, thinking it was just because I was bias, but I'm actually really impressed with this ...

Well, for your first poem it's not all that bad. It's so small that there's not much to review, and I'm not the best poem reviewer in the world. Try ...

Well, I think you just found a follower to your novel ;) It is reality fiction right? This sounds very interesting, and I'm totally interested in it just as long ...

Well it's been a while since I've reviewed (I'm not going to admit how long) but this seemed worthy. I loved it! I loved the moral and it was so ...

First of all I would like to comment on your great use of detail and similies. I was very impressed with your writing. Trembling [Comma] I reach for his hand, ...

I thought after a couple paragraphs this would just get annoying, but after I finished it I couldn't help but laugh. I don't really have a review for you since ...

Definitely creepy, but it didn't make me scream. I read far worse. But no offense :) I think this would have been much better if it were a little longer. ...

This is so inspiring and definitely has a good message :) The only problem I see with this is the rhyming seemed forced at places. and exclaim "Get out some ...

Wow that was long. I suggest cutting it into two parts so it doesn't look as long. You'll get more reviews that way :) I realize this was posted clear ...

I also think you did a great job with the beginning and really drew your reader in. I just hope you clear some things up in the next chapter because ...

I think this is a good song and it definitley has potentional but it also needs a lot of work. Have you, Ever felt, As though the walls, are closing, ...

I loved this! I have nothing to point out but I couldn't believe this was all true. You sound like you had quite the childhood :) I could tell my ...