spyritsentry

The idea was interesting and it was well put together. I found it a bit quick but that is probably because you haven't gotten to the full story yet. I ...

Great poem. I see this in the eyes of my fellow friends everyday. They deserve better you obviously understand. This work got my mind going. I will make sure that ...

Great poem! The emotion his carved in extremely well to the point wear I have never felt this way but can now understand a little more. The flow was wonderful. ...

This is a very good poem. Have you every realy felt like that cause I have and it is not a good feeling. Good job with meaning and emotion. Not ...

wonderful peom. I loved the word chose and the meaning the most. This is the best poem I have read so far and I have read alot. The talet you ...

Friggin awsome poem. I like happy poems. This one is about beauty and how you marvole something. Very nice world choice. You are added to my fallow list.

Very nice poem and I think you should do what you think is right. If you think it should be longer then make it longer. If you think it should ...

it was a nice poem i saw nothing wrong with it. I would actualy liked it more if it was longer, but it was deep.

good peom

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I realy like this. I think it is something most people can relate to I know I can.

It was a good story but abit choppy at bits. i saw a few things that could be fixed but hey we all mess up. But over all wonderful story ...