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spottedkit

  • Poetry » Literature, Romantic Re: The Kingly Mammal

    A caracal?

    Sep 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: The shapes of time

    I'm glad you enjoyed it!

    May 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: The shapes of time

    Thanks! This will help me a lot in future poems :D

    May 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: The shapes of time

    Thanks! Using punctuation made it look odd.. so it decided to take a nap and skip out on this poem.

    May 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Legacy

    I liked how you described things in your poem. It catches the reader's attention and makes them think. The rhyming also flows well, it doesn't look forced. - Spotted

    Feb 24, 2013


Besides, if you want perfection, write a haiku. Anything longer is bound to have some passages that don't work as well as they might.
— Philip Pullman