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I don't know if I can say much more than what has already been said. I agree, though. You could just subtly explain things, bit by bit. That way you ...

Hello Wanderer, This was everything I was expecting and more! I loved it! I caught on quickly that attacks on the town were common, but considering some others didn't, you ...

There are a lot of mistakes, but other than that the story itself is very interesting. I agree! Personally I'd have liked to get to know the area, situation and ...

I like this very much indeed! The beginning needed something more to hook my interest and reel me in, but the rest is very good at doing that. I am ...

I liked this very much and can't wait for more, however I agree with Volant, it is a little fast. You also lost me here too, A gentle hand-not a ...