speakerskat

WOW serious congrats!

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Hey there Kat here to review for you

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Hey there Kat here to review for you

There's no right or wrong meaning and sorry my computer screwed up the formatting ! I intended her to be dreaming of things she didn't have and a person who ...

My friends think all my writing is creepy XD so . But thanks

It's always the girl speaking but in reality ne verse she's talking about a song " the girl and her marionette "

Ah very true , there you go I meant to fix that.

By curious I meant that I didn't know what it was , when I was younger

I was reading this and I was like I HAVE READ THIS SOMEWHERE WHAT???? Then I realized I wrote a review awhile back . I just wanna say congrats on ...

I fixed it how is it now :D

I fixed it how is it now :D

I fixed it how is it now :D

I fixed it how is it now :D

Yeah I've also noticed the begenning of the story is rushed I am gonna probably double everything's legnth

Agreed the poem needs work . How would you suggest I get the song song rhythm in my readers mind ? Being such a great poet yourself