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My! This poem teems with emotion. I don't know whether it was the short, choppy structure, or the desolate setting (I loved the lone bird flying by!). Anyways, this left ...

Hey! I really liked this! The poem may not have a running plot, or a clear-cut moral...but I felt like you were trying to convey a fleeting moment, a certain ...

Loved this! i could feel what you were writing about on my tongue as you wrote - it was AWESOME. I applaud the strength of your imagery! About the so-called ...

Hello! I agree, this poem is so powerful! You've really managed to write about drug addiction (so often written about!) in a way that strikes the reader as totally unique. ...

Gosh, this poem is entertaining! I love the way you've altered the language to make it so uniquely coyboy, and I think you've really succeeded. Its such an oeiginal idea ...

I really loved this poem. The personification of Death was extremely powerful. The use of brackets was original and added to the shock factor. I disagree that you used to ...