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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Insanity.

    Dear MaKriege, This might sound weird, but I totally understand your poem. The words reach out through the screen of my computer as I listen to From Finner by Of ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Soon

    This was a great read and I hope you will continue to write, but there are a few things I would like to mention, one in particular. It seems that ...

    Dec 16, 2012
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Wolf (Temporary title till I can find something)

    Anything by the name of wolf or werewolf would catch someones eyes, but you could use a name for wolf or werewolf in a different language like greek or Italian. ...

    Jan 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Clouds of Chalk

    The entry to this poem was very exciting for the first part and at first I thought you were talking about love, but when I kept reading I noticed that ...

    Jan 1, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Evening of Christmas

    Great song. I barely have anything to say about it but great work. The peice itself is a little bit neat for a few lyrics and you use the words ...

    Dec 29, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Rain

    An extremely descriptive piece and the punctuation and notation of the words and sentences were executed perfectly. I hope that you will write more stories in the future so that ...

    Dec 29, 2010
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Ocean

    Fantastic story but the punctuation was off and I would definitely count you off on that. Um there really isn't anything else to say besides good job and keep up ...

    Dec 29, 2010
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: My Special Biography

    Fantastic story my friend but i wish it would be more exciting. I'm into exciting stories with a twist at the end. I would give you 40 points for overall ...

    Dec 28, 2010


The magic is only in what books say, how they stitched the patches of the universe together into one garment for us.
— Ray Bradbury, Fahrenheit 451