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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Insanity.

    Dear MaKriege, This might sound weird, but I totally understand your poem. The words reach out through the screen of my computer as I listen to From Finner by Of ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Soon

    This was a great read and I hope you will continue to write, but there are a few things I would like to mention, one in particular. It seems that ...

    Dec 16, 2012
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Wolf (Temporary title till I can find something)

    Anything by the name of wolf or werewolf would catch someones eyes, but you could use a name for wolf or werewolf in a different language like greek or Italian. ...

    Jan 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Clouds of Chalk

    The entry to this poem was very exciting for the first part and at first I thought you were talking about love, but when I kept reading I noticed that ...

    Jan 1, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Evening of Christmas

    Great song. I barely have anything to say about it but great work. The peice itself is a little bit neat for a few lyrics and you use the words ...

    Dec 29, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Rain

    An extremely descriptive piece and the punctuation and notation of the words and sentences were executed perfectly. I hope that you will write more stories in the future so that ...

    Dec 29, 2010
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Ocean

    Fantastic story but the punctuation was off and I would definitely count you off on that. Um there really isn't anything else to say besides good job and keep up ...

    Dec 29, 2010
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: My Special Biography

    Fantastic story my friend but i wish it would be more exciting. I'm into exciting stories with a twist at the end. I would give you 40 points for overall ...

    Dec 28, 2010


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