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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: One In The Mirror

    I am absolutely in love with the simplicity of your poem. I believe that you can express so much with little words and your poem does just that. It is ...

    Oct 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: -Deleted-

    Hello! I can totally relate to this poem! I know what it is like to want to fall in love with someone but be scared to do so because you ...

    May 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Time.

    Hello! First and foremost, I absolutely loved this poem. However, you might want to consider changing the title. It was a little misleading to me. When I read the title, ...

    May 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Summer's Dream

    I absolutely loved this piece. Similar to other comments posted, the last few parts could use a bit of work. Sitting here, reading this poem, you helped me realize why ...

    Jan 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Remember me

    I absolutely loved it. It's so simple, yet it tells so much about a story. It is absolutely wonderful. There were a few typos here and there and some awkwardness ...

    Jan 14, 2011


The bird that would soar above the level plain of tradition and prejudice must have strong wings. It is a sad spectacle to see the weaklings bruised, exhausted, fluttering back to earth.
— Kate Chopin, The Awakening