sokool15

Thanks all for the great crits...I just changed the 'salty' stuff. I think you're might make a good longer story. If you ever see something on this sight that contains ...

Thanks for your comments. The weird thing is, my computer program always marks my apostraphies as wrong when i do them the right way. I guess it sort of made ...

Sorry about the little mix-up on your critique. Something must have gotten off. I signed my critique before I was supposed to, then put corrections afterwards. If this is a ...

Thanks for your critiques, guys! I'll go through and carry them out ASAP. I'll write some more on it and post it in the sci-fi section, so look there if ...

I loved this piece. It was really touching. Just one tiny little error typo. 'm' instead of 'me', I think. But this was a really nice, touching story. Congrats. Yrs ...

This was really great work! I was impressed. I really enjoyed reading it and your word choice and the flow of your language is impressive. Good job... 8)

Always almost and almost never always This is pretty much a roundabout way of saying 'not very often'. I was referring to sanity here. Always almost, I'm always almost sane, ...

Thanks for the critiques! When I have time, I'll definitely look into them. I do agree on your ideas...especially the 'bulbous'. Would you believe I actually went back and took ...

Thanks for the tips! I look forward to chewing apart my story! I will remember what you said about exclamation points! And I definitely see what you mean! Thanks again ...

Great poem! I really liked it...I love the references. Great work! :)