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Oh... oh... *sigh* That was the most beautiful, tragic story ever! And lovely at the same time. Amazing. I don't even have any critiques, so I suppose I shouldn't have ...

Okay, wow. I must admit I was shocked - astonished - startled - surprised to find that you're a very good writer! The reason? Profiles at the beginning. I must ...

Hi KJ! Good to see your stuff on here. *cough appleandagraveyard?? cough cough* :P Okay, despite the fact that this was basically a retelling of the Twelve Dancing Princesses, it's ...

Hm. Well, it's really imaginative, and a very good setting and scene, with a fun tone, but I really couldn't forge my way through very much of it. The capitalization, ...

*gasps and shudders* yeek! Should have waited until morning to read this. It's midnight and I'm alone... ideal for creepiness, right? :P Very well done story. I enjoyed it a ...

Um... yeah. Some definite problems here. I really like the idea, and it sounds like you've got good ideas and an engaging voice going here, but serious deficiencies with grammar, ...

Mmmm, lovely. I really don't have any sweeping generalizations for this one, just a few typo thingummies. “I guess, yeah, I don’t have any plans. I’m just trying to finish ...

Awwwwww.... this whole story is so sweet and simple, it makes me smile whenever I read it. I have a feeling Kate's going to do something unpleasant soon, here, though. ...

That's very sweet. I thought the end was very, very abrupt, though. You should have done it at the beginning of the next chapter - that would have made more ...

It was typical of my family to throw a St. Patrick's Day party, only invite Italian people, and then not cook any food remotely Irish. Hee hee... that made me ...

Hey... um... a little confused here! Which one goes first, this one or the one in romantic fiction? You should post all in one forum so I'll know, or at ...

Hey, this is really good again! You've got a couple minor problems with grammar and punctuation, but nothing too confusing or unfixable. It's mostly your storyline and characters that have ...

YEEK! You're amazing! I loved this made me smile to hard to see Caiden finally loosening up, showing some interest. It was perhaps a little sudden - he was so ...

Oooh...*sigh* KJ, why aren't you, like three different people, so you could continue all of your novels at once! That was lovely. Sad, though. Did the first chapter just pop ...

Awesome continuation yet again! This story is probably my favorite of the ones you're working on right now - perhaps it's because I like the MC, lol. I think perhaps ...