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Oooo...dee dee dee dee dee dee dee dee...DWEEEEEP!!! (for those of you who don't read music, that was the theme from 'twilight zone.') I really enjoyed reading this. I don't ...

Wow....this was really, really great. I watched the Phantom of the Opera for the first time last night, and cried *of course*. The piece you have written has really reincarnated ...

I didn't absolutely hate Eragon...and you have to admit, he was very young when he sketched out the plot, and probably still in the middle of reading all those books ...

Wow, I really loved this. Perhaps it should have been in 'romantic fiction,' just because the strongest theme is unconquerable love, but still...a beautiful piece. One sentence: "I rushed over ...

Good sequel...I'm glad you decided to keep going on it. An interesting idea: to start with the diary-style, a transition letter, then a more narative, third-person style. It changes perspectives ...

I really liked this; funny, entertaining...especially the part about the compass. I've often felt like taking the nearest thing to hand and stabbing someone with it, but I never really ...

Ha! I've got you all beat with 38...and a lot of them are series, too! A lot of these are great books, but some of them are...I just don't understand ...

Heh heh heh... this story almost got me in trouble! I was reading it in the computer lab during my music theory class, and I burst out laughing and everybody ...

Yes, I agree...you could have put Part 1 and Part 2 together. I think you need a little clearer separation from when Lyla is daydreaming to when she is in ...

I just dropped a critique on your 'sequel' to this piece, which I also enjoyed very much! I really, really, really like it. Overall, I'm not one for language and ...

First of all...extremely well written. There were not a lot of gramatical or spelling errors. However, you never made it clear what the relationship was between Glory and Mariel, or ...

I agree with the others...a really good beginning. The tenses, however, seem to be slightly messed up. You begin by speaking in past tense, but then you throw in a ...

Ha! I like this...continue the story, please! This entry was just a little too short to do any real good, however. You should wait until you have an entire chapter, ...

I really liked this! It was entertaining, interesting, and very well-written. One thing, and one thing only: 'hostels.' Is that really a word or did you mean; "hotels?" Forgive my ...

Overall a piece that made me want to read more! Are you going to continue? Please... I don't have time, I'm afraid, to go over your piece with a fine-toothed ...