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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Tied Up

    Hello! I notice you're relatively new to the site so welcome!! :D I liked this a lot! It was very direct and, as lilymoore said, blunt which works very well ...

    Jun 12, 2009
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Do these even exist?

    Hello! Hmmm well I would have to second several suggestion... How I Live Now Junk The Book Thief I loved all three! Also you could try: The Lost Art of ...

    Jun 11, 2009
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: The Great Gatsby

    When I first read the book I have to say I didn't enjoy it at all, but it was one of our exam texts this year for AS Levels and ...

    Jun 11, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: One big, not-so-happy family.

    Hi fragile_heart! Firstly I would like to thank you for reviewing my piece 'This Is What I Wish I Could Say To You' I really appreciate you taking the time! ...

    Jun 11, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Albert stood observing himself

    Hello there! Firstly, I see you're new so welcome to YWS! :D There's a welcome Forum where you can post to say hello if you feel like it (That's if ...

    Apr 16, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Worthless

    Hey Megan (I hope you don't mind me calling you just Megan) I'm Sofi and I'm going to be doing a review of your writing..well obviously :D Anyway, I didn't ...

    Apr 13, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Part 1 of Louisa Madison's story

    Hi there! Firstly, welcome to YWS! :D Secondly, your review!! I have some little nit-picks first of all. They aren't anything very big just little things I noticed, and then ...

    Apr 11, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Wrong answer.

    Hi Meep! :D I have a few nit-picks first but not many at all and a few a noticed have already been pointed out so I will try not to ...

    Apr 10, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: It's the things you don't hear...

    Hello :D Well firstly I was wondering whether you're going to continue with this? Because if you weren't planning to then I think you really should because I want to ...

    Apr 6, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: baby brother

    Hi there! :D Unfortunatley poetry isn't my forte (although I wish it was!) I just like to read it but there were just one or two things which I noticed ...

    Jan 26, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Dusting Off Angels

    Hey Evi! Okay, firstly nit-picks (of which there is only one!) And Death had him frozen at the window, looking at a mid-day sky that was the color of false ...

    Jan 25, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Paradise Island (2)

    Hello, again! :D Alrighty, well most of the little nit-picks that I would have picked have already been mentioned (and there were hardly any at all :D ) except, I ...

    Jan 24, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Paradise Island (1)

    Hello there :D I'm Sofi and I shall be giving you a review this evening. First, the turbulence. Then the panicking. I distinctly remember the smell of fear in I ...

    Jan 21, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Giving Up

    Hello there Cat! Unfortunatly, I don't have time for a long crituique since I'm actually meant to be sleeping since I'm up for school tomorow, which is annoying because I ...

    Jan 20, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Living

    Hello there, I'm Sofi :D I hope you're liking YWS so far. I'm a greeter (my name's blue) so I'm basically here to help you out with anything if you ...

    Jan 19, 2009


Everything I’ve ever let go of has claw marks on it.
— David Foster Wallace