sodapoplunchbox

Hello SlyNightOwl! I liked this story, it's unique. Nowadays I see too many stories about vampires and other creatures, but Demons is a first. Anyways, I have a few grammar ...

Hello EmmVeePi! You have a good idea for this story, but I think you should edit your transitions more. For example: Picking the bag up off the counter I lead ...

hey Bulletproof1994! I loved this poem. The name "Purple Skies and Tasty Lies" was interesting, but not in a bad way. That's what got me to click on the story, ...

Hello cuteballetdancer7, I'll start by saying that clearly this must have been a rough patch for you since it was a true story. With that being said, I think you ...

Hey LittlePrincess! This has peaked my curiosity, even though I haven't read any of your other pieces. I sense a bit of drama going on, you made it very clear ...

Hello ninjacookiemonster! Well, this was interesting. lol, to tell you the honest truth, I couldn't follow this story at all. There were too many characters that weren't described at all, ...

Hello antoinette! Your story is good, my favorite part was when you said: In fact, I remember that day with stunning clarity. Some people think that you remember the good ...

Hello Lilicia! I'm SodapopLunchbox(: In review, your prologue is very good. I'm not gonna lie, I wasn't expecting the end. I was shocked and laughing at the same time. Well, ...

Hey LovexPeacexRandomx3! (I love your name btw) I'm SodapopLunchbox with your review(: I'm not going to lie, in the beginning, I was thinking, ugh, another typical theme (no offense) but ...

Hello Misamiera! I'm SodapopLunchbox, here to review your lovely story. As you could probably tell, I really liked this. Kids these days don't really enjoy quality time with their relatives ...

Hello UnderestimatedSmiles! This story was awesome!!! Very well written, I enjoyed reading it. I hope that your motivation gets renewed because this is a good story. Its not your typical, ...

Hello jokeless7jester! I'm Sodapoplunchbox here to review your work(: I'd like to begin by saying I liked this piece. I didn't read your previous chapter, but this is interesting. I ...

Hello jjssyy! I see that you are new to YWS. Welcome! I joined a few months ago and I love this website. Anyways, onto the review. You have a knack ...

Hello RedSmiles! I'll start by telling you that I have not read your other chapters from this series, so the intro in the beginning helped me. But even without this ...

Hello prism180! I like the idea you have here about mankind!! But there are a few things I want to point out And you know what...that makes it alot more ...