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Thanks i will fix it!

Nicely written, I really like the flow of it! Depressing and slightly chilling, yet I like it a lot :)

Beginning of a sequel to night life. Tell me what you think please!!!!

Hey my teacher just returned our stories graded and she didn't like mine. Knowing you guys did, helps a lot!!

Nicely done!! I like the flow in it and the creative idea you had. The first two stanzas were my favorite!! keep it up :smt002

That is a really neat poem! It was not what i expected at all! I liked how you ended it to tie everything together :D Good Job!!

Ahhh! Thanks sooo much, I'm literally shrieking with excitement because you guys actually like my story!! Your comments mean sooo much to me. :)

I changed the title. Is it better? If not, any suggestions?

thanks guys! I will try to figure in alex more when I go back and edit it. :)

Thanks for your reviews! This was just kind of a "spur of the moment" type thing. I am glad you liked it. It is love, but dream would work too ...

This is soooo sweet! It makes me smile. I love the way the narartor spoke of her love. Truly bueatiful, nicely done. The last stanza is my favorite. :)

Wow, i really feel the pain of the narrarator. the love of her life will never come back! I thought that this was very good, but sad. Great job and ...

This is great, not at all like you had thought of it!! I liked how u made it rhyme because I just always think it gives poems a great rythym ...

Wow that was sooo neat and creative!! I thought that it was a great way to show how inspiration can come from anything in life

I liked your poem! It was short and sweet and simple, which made it kind of creepy. Keep writing, I would love to read more from you :)