soccerfreak2516

I love this! What did I do during lunch and recess? Where did I go all by myself? Naria, Faerie, Avalon, Middle Earth. You name it, I've been there. Even ...

I love the imagery you use. The only problem I see is the last three lines of the first stanza. It seems sort of awkward/confusing. I think it would make ...

I really like the idea behind this. The topic of mirrors is one of my personal favorites. My only real complaint is that parts of it are repetitive. You use ...