snowberry23

Hey i really really liked made sense and it was so beautiful, i really felt what you were trying to say. I do have a few inputs though. I dont ...

I think this is very good, but almost needs more of a middle, if you know what I mean. I think you jump into the point to quickly and it ...

This is not only very well written but it is also a magnificent poem. You stay on topic, it makes sense, and I truly love the line “In words ensconced ...

Hey, okay, well I’m just going to jump right in...I love it! The quote that has been debated about is correct, it doesn’t sound like it, but when I read ...

Wow, i really love this poem. This is up to you, seeing as it is your poem, but i can see it being longer. Extend the imagery just a bit ...

Prologue Only three people knew Hayden Curnow and I were dating. Me, him, and his sister, Elizabeth, usually known as El. We wanted to keep it that way, until the ...

I lie in wait for something grand A feeling greater than this sensation Pulsing through my veins My body trembles at your fingers touch Flesh to flesh, becoming one. Your ...

My mind didn’t fly off somewhere else while I was reading, that happens when I read my chemistry textbook, but I did get a smidge lost during the course of ...

He's screaming his lungs out, saying "i love you!" I'm moping in the corner, wishing it was true. Why didn't i realize? he hasn't been the same. I'm growing tired, ...

I agree with Deleted6 when it comes to the title, there is just a bit too much repetition, however, I do respect your use of powerful diction. The tone itself ...

Well, you definitely aren’t allotting yourself enough credit, so let me say this, you are a fantastic writer. I myself struggle with switching in and out of character when I ...