snickerdooly

My edits are in parenthesis :) "I look at a mirror, My reflection I see. I look at the sky, Bird swoop joyfuly. (joyfully) I look at the trees, Swaying ...

I really liked this piece, it flowed really well and had great imagery. The only thing I don't like is the title, I feel like you would get more readers ...

I really liked this piece, I could feel the emotions in the poem even though it was only three stanzas. Also I liked the idea of being trapped and needing ...

I really loved this poem the rhyming was overall okay, except there were a few instances when it did seem forced. But I totally understand cause sometimes it's very difficult ...

Wow this piece was amazing, I loved your writing style and the abstract way in which you wrote. I had to read this a second time because I liked it ...

I really liked this piece, overall it was very descriptive and gave the reader lots of unseen detail. I liked the abstract way of writing and the small bit about ...

I really enjoyed this piece it was jam packed with details and abstract ways of thinking, I saw nothing wrong with it even though at times it was a little ...

Hey I know this was posted quite a while ago but I was peeking around in your portfolio and came across this awesome piece of writing! I thought the entire ...

This is so amazing. There is absolutely nothing wrong with it in my eyes, the narration was great and just the overall meaning of the story was incredible. Even though ...

Wow I really loved this piece! It was abstract but to me made total sense. I loved the bit about drenching yourself in gasoline and lighting a spark, it created ...

I really liked this poem it flowed nicely though I did think the ending ended too abrubtly, whuch kinda ruined the flow of the poem. So I suggest making at ...

I really loved this poem, one because it was creative and unique two because I love Alice In Wonderland both the movie (movies) and book. I thought it did seem ...

Edits are in red. Comments in blue. :) She finds The lipstick on his collar Dark red Menacing Smeared across the whiteness of his shirt This is a great into ...

I really really really liked this poem (Sorry for overusing the word really :)) It flowed really nicely though at times the repetition of the word could was overused. I ...

I really liked this, it had great rhyming and rythme. The overall message was great, I'm suprised you didn't get more comments and likes because I think this deserves to ...