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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: A Bitter Beauty

    Hey! I love you poem is great ,but what I like the most is the end talks about a deep regret . some times even the beauty can't have a ...

    Dec 17, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Innocence

    Hi :) I really enjoyed reading your poem .I like how you expressed weakness by saying: "innocence taken from a little girl's heart",and how you made us feel that you ...

    Dec 17, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Lies

    Hi there I liked your poem , the description of the feelings that you are looking for and how the end was .I really enjoyed reading your poem is so ...

    Dec 17, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My Soul Mate

    I agree with the others it is so good because of the honest feelings and the description of pain .But, what I like the most is the losing control in ...

    Dec 17, 2010


Painting is poetry that is seen rather than felt, and poetry is painting that is felt rather than seen.
— Leonardo da Vinci