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Re: A Bitter Beauty
Hey! I love you poem is great ,but what I like the most is the end talks about a deep regret . some times even the beauty can't have a ...
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Re: Innocence
Hi :) I really enjoyed reading your poem .I like how you expressed weakness by saying: "innocence taken from a little girl's heart",and how you made us feel that you ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: Lies
Hi there I liked your poem , the description of the feelings that you are looking for and how the end was .I really enjoyed reading your poem is so ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: My Soul Mate
I agree with the others it is so good because of the honest feelings and the description of pain .But, what I like the most is the losing control in ...
Dec 17, 2010
