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Hi! I would just like to convey my support of the above comments, because I would just be repeating them! I particularly like the line 'fell out of their mouths,' ...

Hi CM, I really enjoyed this poem, I found it very chilling and yet compelling. It builds a lot of tension which you manage to round off nicely. I think ...

Well hi there, thank you to you all for your kind words, they've all been very helpful. I must admit I was pretty nervous about submitting my work initially. I ...

A great poem with a consistent flow. Very dark but also with an element of truth. Some great magical realism there nice work!