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Re: Pigment and Bone
This reminds me of a short story rather than a lyrical. I love the word "burnished." I am curious if it is his "facade we fear" or the narrator's. Also, ...
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Re: Pigment and Bone
This reminds me of a short story rather than a lyrical. I love the word "burnished." I am curious if it is his "facade we fear" or the narrator's. Also, ...
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Re: Holi and her
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Mar 10, 2026
I love this line: 'The messages you sent burst in me Like small water balloons filled of glee' It is a love that's lacking yet not lost, yet it bursts ... -
Re: The Killing Goes With The 3; Me, Mine, and Ours.
I am curious to know about my own work if the Red Queen with slitted green eyes is Celanea's cat or if it's a transformative Phoenix. I'm guessing Yearned is ...
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Re: Life moves on
Wow. "bills have to be paid" a true sign of wisdom and peace. An obvious "don't hold a grudge" poem. Because friends are forever and there is true peace in ...
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Re: the cost of your happiness
I think this is the most realistic setting of friends with benefits when you don't realize that one person is not dating the other. You're strong and so am I. ...
Mar 9, 2026 -
Re: the cost of your happiness
I think this is the most realistic setting of friends with benefits when you don't realize that one person is not dating the other. You're strong and so am I. ...
Mar 9, 2026
