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Re: no
I was scared to death for about two minutes and then I realized that this was a joke. Thank goodness. Overall, I thought this was wonderfully satirical and I appreciate ...
Aug 2, 2014 -
Re: discomposure
I don't know whether this poem is personal or not, and I won't ask if it is, but it's really, really beautiful all the same. I suppose my only problem ...
Aug 2, 2014 -
Re: Sky
I feel like this poem was an attempt at compacting a much larger story into an abridged version and I feel like it didn't work perfectly. This concept is beautiful ...
Aug 1, 2014 -
Re: you wont like me when you wake
WHAT NO STOP THIS IS SO GOOD. I don't actually know what to say about this because it's near perfection, but in an imperfect, sloppy sort of way (which is ...
Jul 31, 2014 -
Re: .
There were so many grammatical errors in the first paragraph that I stopped caring altogether, which, in retrospect, probably set me up to enjoy the poem much more than I ...
Jul 31, 2014
