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I loved it! I should like to know what is going on

Wow :xd:

It was a good story! I love the way you described the character's death at the end! MORE! :D

I agree with Winie on this one. I can vouch for what "too-many idea syndrome" is like. It does do all them things you wrote about! Good work!

This is so beutifully written! I have only been a member for a few days, but I have seen works such as this one that break the "Potter Mold". Good ...

Thank you for the critism and I will get to work editing this story. I wasn't sure of the interruption, either.

Is the turning of the tree a metaphor for that he has done somethig great, or has ge litterally tirned into a tree? Other than that, good one! :smt003

More! MORE!! 8)

What an emotional rollercoaster! I really felt like bursting into tears at the end! Good job! :cry:

That is one disturbing story you've got there! Very well written, I say! :thud:

Wow. You are writing in a very difficult person and you have atchieved it really well! But who is the face in the mirror? Are you going to continue with ...

Well, you now those massive Camper Bags? That's what I meant. About the gun, in the origonal it was going to be a paper knife, but I changed it into ...

You have an amazing way with words! I was feeling real sympathy for the main character and hatred of her tormentors, especially Blaine

I think that this a good introduction to a story that can be developed

Thanks for the comment! I was so worried that people might find the begining cliche but now I think that people might actually enjoy the story.