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Oh, sorry

This is quite a confusing poem, with all of it's contradictions and opposites, but strangly the structure fitted it like a glove. Just a little nitpick, "i" is in capitals, ...

I'll be lockin' this, as is it about 3-5 months old, alright, guys?

Seeing as though this is a very old one, I shall lock it! :smt003

Thanks guys! I've been on a slog recently, but it looks like I've made a comeback!

The imagry of this piece was good, however, there is a definite battle between show and tell, here. Otherwise good work and keep writing!

Thanks for that! I'll get to it when I can. But, I do have my reasons for setting them as short as a did. You see (history lesson coming up) ...

Hey, Vas, another good script, there. The dialogue between the characters were good and realistic. The stage directions are nice and simple, so you took the actors in account. Good ...

I like this piece but, Moo is right, it is a piece of Narrative Poetry.

I do think I am going to lock this one, it has been on the front page for a while and I would like to see you guys commenting on ...

I think I have commented on this in the news tab. Still, rather good article I thought.

I quite liked this piece. It had real emotion about it that was through the whole thing. I think this could go somewhere, so keep writing and I'll keep suscribing, ...

This is a good poem. It outlines everything a best friend should do for other people. The description was very good and straight to the point. Good job! Skutter11, worst ...

To reply to Laura, I might write more, yet, I may not...

This is a completly origonal idea and I love it! It's really clever the way that the stanza has been set out, furthermore, it doesn't interfere with the narritive of ...