skutter11

Hi! My name's skutter11 and I shall be your reviewer for the day! Green is my comments and red is grammar things I've picked up, alright? --------------------------------------------------------------

So, if you don't mind me asking, which Doctor did you write this for? Remeber that each Doctor has his own personality and such, so if it is for a ...

Hi, my name's skutter and I shall be your reviewer for the day! Red for grammar, green for everyone else, ok? They say you shouldn't cry over spilt milk, but ...

Hello, I'm skutter and I'll be your reveiwer for today! Red for grammar and spelling, green for everything else, ok? Today you were murdered. Fourteen years ago on this very ...

Hi, my name's skutter and I shall be your reviewer for the day! Grammar is in red everything else, green, ok? The first part wasn't really needed, you know “Story ...

To be quite honest, I can't find anything wrong with the piece. Whatever ESD did, it wasn't good if you've ended up with paranoia. Still, at least it won't develop ...

I think this poem is very good because it highlights exactly what you are trying to say. The word choice is excellent and it flowed really well. The structure is ...

I know exactly where your coming from Retro. Anyway, to the matter at hand, the poem coveys the point really well, the emotions were shown in the piece really well ...

Well, I like this poem. Speaking as a student of Classics, I say it is completely preicise in it's facts and you've written it really well. Now, speaking as a ...

Ok, I understand that grammar isn't your strong point, but, I'll correct some little things for you, if thats alright? The "I" is always a capital if refering to yourself ...

This quite a good interpretation of Romeo and Juliet! The whole thing followed really well and the rhyming didn't falter once. The rhythm kept up really well, too. The imagry ...

I like this poem, it has a lot of heart in it and it flows really smoothly! One little thing, however: "The feeling in my chest, knowing you’re the best" ...

Aww, this poem is really sweet! I like the way you kept the reader guessing about what has happened through out. One slight nitpick, however, "Zues" isn't spelled right, it's ...

I think this little poem could use, at most, one more stanza. You have some good imagry going on here but you need to enlongate it a little. The word ...

This poem flows really well and the imagry of it is amazing. I do have a couple of nitpicks, however: 1. "Full of hatred and shame is coming", I think ...