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Re: Mechanical Bride
The repetative use of mechanical bride is, i agree, annoying to read but as previously mentioned, this is more or less, a spoken poem and the overuse of that word ...
Mar 28, 2006 -
Re: Effervescence
Effervescence: To emit small bubbles of gas, as a carbonated or fermenting liquid
Oct 25, 2005 -
Re: Sale
Love your style and approach to a topic i too agree with...suggestion: break up the "poem" into paragraphs, its hard reading a big clump without getting lost, nicely done, i ...
Feb 18, 2005 -
Re: my lil' intro
thanx for your comments...they are most appreciated and thank you for deleting the million unnecessary forums i posted b4...i'm still very much new at this
Feb 18, 2005