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Re: Mary, Lie Down
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Oooooh, I like this! This is a perfect, timeless nursery rhyme... with a sinister, dark undertone. This appeals to children in its rhythm and melody, and to adults for this ... -
Re: Waltz With me
I'll admit: I think this relationship is on the rocks. This is a couple that know each other too well, and seem bored with one another. Was that your intention? ...
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Re: Waltz With me
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Re: Chiravian Knights - Chapter 3
You clearly haven't been exposed to the worst curses.
Sep 25, 2015 - Re: Chiravian Knights - Chapter 3 Sep 25, 2015
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Re: Chiravian Knights - Chapter 3
You have some well-described creatures here: the scrabbling of Noctua's claws, the swishing tails, etc. Do you have some images of these creatures? I loved that description of the geyser ...
Sep 25, 2015 - Re: A Tale of Two Sorcerors: The Coup (Chapter 1: Jabril Halabi) May 19, 2015
