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  • Lyrics » Horror, Narrative Re: Mary, Lie Down

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    Oooooh, I like this! This is a perfect, timeless nursery rhyme... with a sinister, dark undertone. This appeals to children in its rhythm and melody, and to adults for this ...

    Sep 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Waltz With me

    I'll admit: I think this relationship is on the rocks. This is a couple that know each other too well, and seem bored with one another. Was that your intention? ...

    Sep 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Waltz With me

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    Sep 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Chiravian Knights - Chapter 3

    You clearly haven't been exposed to the worst curses.

    Sep 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Chiravian Knights - Chapter 3

    Sep 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Chiravian Knights - Chapter 3

    You have some well-described creatures here: the scrabbling of Noctua's claws, the swishing tails, etc. Do you have some images of these creatures? I loved that description of the geyser ...

    Sep 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fanfiction Re: A Tale of Two Sorcerors: The Coup (Chapter 1: Jabril Halabi)

    May 19, 2015


Life’s disappointments are harder to take if you don’t know any swear words.
— Bill Watterson