singingwriter1673

That was very nice :) it sounded very much like a tale that would be told. I liked the use of the words and te story is itself was good. ...

This is cute :) I like the detail and I think you should write more of it. It has the potential to turn into a really cute love story. The ...

Wow. That's all I can say. This piece flowed so beautifully and it hit all the right places of my heart. I feel like you're actually reading me. This is ...

I could not stop laughing. This was a perfect parody of that movie. I'm a Twilight fan but I do appreciate when someone makes something like this. The "Jasper: O.O" ...

This reminded me of Snow White and the Huntsman :) I really enjoyed reading this. I liked the detail that you put into describing each character. It helped me picture ...

My first thoughts on this was that it has huge potential. I like the idea of the quotes but I think they would be more effective if they were used ...