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Re: Assassin's Rampage
Aloha, and welcome to YWS! I like this story. I like all stories with some kind of action in it and this one had plenty! The blood and gore...well, not ...
May 30, 2008 -
Re: The EagleFire Squadron
Ooh, I like this! Personally, I haven't read any sci-fi in a long time, and this looks excellent. It was very...how do you say, interesting. I liked the battle scenes ...
May 30, 2008 -
Re: Approval
I liked it. It somewhat shows the emotions of a girl who isn't noticed or accepted by the boy and/or crowd she wants to be with. I would suggest that ...
May 4, 2008 -
Re: The Last Time
Wow, that was...weird, but in a very good way. I enjoyed it a lot, and normally I don't read this type of stories very much. The ending was good but ...
May 4, 2008 -
Re: Childlike
This was a very sweet, kind-of sad thing that I enjoyed greatly. The narrator has a sense of maturity, I guess. It's something you don't see a lot nowadays. This ...
May 3, 2008 -
Re: At the Crossroads
Very, very, good. I enjoyed it very much and I'm very interested. Paul doesn't want to be a lawyer, eh? Being a lawyer is a very trying and tiring job. ...
May 3, 2008