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Re: Bella's 30th Birthday
Ohmygosh. Not going to be harsh here as it is a very creative well written story. BUT... Ohmygosh! As a Twi-hard, this scenario is going to give me nightmares for ...
Nov 3, 2009 -
Re: Water and Glass
Wonderful poem. At first I didn't understand about the water and glass, but now I do. You're a great poet!
Nov 3, 2009 -
Re: All We Know Is Falling.
Wow. Nice poem; really deep feelings behind it. I agree, the last line is a little out of place...maybe try something else on that line?
Nov 3, 2009 -
Re: Everything
Nice poem. Well written and a great flow.
Nov 3, 2009 -
Re: Dried Apricots
Great poem. Nice flow and the words seem to have emotion behind them. I too thought this poem was going to be quite silly; I am glady surprised! Great work.
Nov 3, 2009