silverfin713

Gotcha. That makes sense. I really shouldn't review things when I'm half-asleep...

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it. That really meant a lot to me, made my day actually. :) I really can't stand romance, and don't usually like it, ...

Thanks for the advice, one of the biggest issues I have in writing is changing verb tense and I almost never catch it. My tolerance for romance of any kind ...

Hey there! Silver here with a review! Ooh, lyrics. I'm excited already. :) I think I'll pick a few "stanzas" (is that what you call it with songs?) and I'll ...

Thanks for all your great input! I'm glad you were able to sense the connection between them, and all your advice will really help me. Thank you! :)

Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you liked it and I just might take you up on your offer. ;) Let me know if you want anything of ...

You're very welcome! It really was impressive for such a short piece, and I'm glad I was able to help. :) Keep it up, you've really got talent, and let ...

You're very welcome! It really was impressive for such a short piece, and I'm glad I was able to help. :) Keep it up, you've really got talent, and let ...

I'd never thought about it that way, but I really like your advice. I see your point, and appreciate your thoughts on my poem. Thanks for reviewing!

I'm glad I was able to get my point across, that's the reaction I was hoping for. :) I agree with the negatives too, though and am working on revising ...

I'm glad you liked it. :) Thanks so much!

Thanks for the feedback! I just might take you up on that challenge. :)

Riley, do not make me cry! I swear, I'm just about to and I like never do. You don't know how happy this makes ME. :) Your favorite poem? But ...

Yay!!!! You posted it!!! I love this piece, and now everybody else can love it, too! :)

Really? You don't know how much this means to me. :) Thanks so much!!! You just made my night!! :) And if you want me to review any of your ...