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Savior Chapter 1 I peered through the dirty window out to the deserted camp grounds. Papers flew across the ground and everything looked a mess. No person was there, just ...

We had just got home from the party and Logan was spending a couple of days here. I immediately go t to my room and get changed. I had just ...

The New Year started with a bang. The sounds from the church bells filled the streets and the night was brightly decorated. People’s laughter and shouts were the norm of ...

They say love is an overpowering emotion. Whoever ‘they’ are couldn’t have said it better. We had known each other as friends. I agree it sounds better as "We knew ...

The sun was starting to set. I now felt safe enough to try to enter the old house. The hill on which it stood loomed before me, the towering, leafless ...

Hey, I really liked this poem. You have a lot of nice descriptions throughout that were not too much, but not too little, which I enjoyed. Some things I would ...

I really liked this poem, but like June I didn't quite understand it. Maybe it is just late night drowsiness, I don't know. I really liked the imagery you provided, ...

Wow, I really really like this piece. Great job. You have a great style that's very desirable that not many writers have, mad props for that. I'm really hooked on ...

I liked this poem, but it was confusing. How you don't specify why her life is changed forever. Also, it wasn't really written like a poem, rhythmic. It was kind ...

"Come back!" I squealed, chasing him around the park. Walker stopped suddenly and I toppled over him. He tickled me until I was earning the attention of everyone in ear ...

I really liked this poem. The rhyming just worked, although most poems like this don't rhyme. I think you pulled it off well. NIT PICKS You rest in piece I ...

Oh my lordy, snoink, this was beautiful. I absolutely loved these lines when you see me now, what you see is not me but a billion photons dancing with my ...

These are my favorite lines: Go into the light The bright beating light of life Although you change direction when you say this: The place that YOU are Where you ...

. Evelyn waved for the last time and turned to face her future, sliding her hand across the carved, finished wood of the balcony. Evelyn’s hands were embraced by shackles ...

Alright, I'll do the line-by-line. Joanna looked around the vast chamber that imprisoned her. The survivors huddled in small groups around her. Maybe it's me but the simple repetition of ...