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sidewalkrunner

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: oh, those teenage years

    Really sweet story! I like it a lot. But then there is that thing that the other reviewers are saying. You should loose the Zoe: *Insert what Zoe says* And ...

    Jul 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Life is Like a Hill

    This is a nice poem! I like the name of the poem and that you clearly explains why its called Life is Like a Hill although out the poem. You ...

    Jul 14, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Viva la Revolucion!

    You are a great writer! This story really drags you in and i really like when people write about corruption in politics. Its exciting and it makes you want to ...

    Jul 14, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Chapter 1 (unknown title)

    This is a nice story, it's really cute! But because it was Fantasy Novels section I would like it to be a bit more descriptive. Just because fantasy novels are ...

    Jul 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Nightmare or Reality?

    Me myself is not that good at poems and I don't really read that much poems. But this one caught my eye and I really liked it! It is really ...

    Jul 14, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Silver Tears Chapter One

    It's a nice story, it really is, and it has all the potential in the world. I just think that the flow could be a little bit better and the ...

    Jul 14, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Charlie

    I like this way of writing and I do think it brings the story onward. And the only thing I can think is negative is that you sometimes reuse a ...

    Jul 14, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Prologue

    This was a very good prologue! You drag the reader in and make them interested. And by that I can tell you are a great writer. I'm very picky when ...

    Jul 14, 2011


"And what is the use of a book," thought Alice, "without pictures or conversations?"
— Lewis Carroll, Alice in Wonderland