shywritergrl168

I love it!!!!!! I know how it feels to be that girl the praticed actress whom know one really knows. No one bothers to actually lift the mask. To see ...

I liked your expression and emotion throughout your piece. I loved th eway you used italic for words you wanted to stand out. only thing I would change is at ...

You could use a little bit of help on the capitalization, spelling and word placement. However your mind is in the right place, taking real life experiances and expressing them ...

I can most definitely relate to this. I know all Him and I see the other people but no one else compares. You are an amazing writer and I love ...

Are you actually British? or do you just like to write that way? - I like you story line but you could do a little more explaining about the individual ...