shulchan

I really love your style of writing! The story itself is really good and I found myself sympathizing with your character. I think that the only line that needs fixing ...

This really held my attention the entire time and kept me wondering what was going to happen next! It kind of freaked me out and I would love to know ...

Wow- this is really good, considering it only took you five minutes! You captured the feelings really well. The only thing I thought you could fix would be to shorten ...