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Re: A small series of Autumn themed haiku
I love the first two! Also, I really like your use of imagery throughout the pieces. In the Halloween one and the chill breezes one (numbers four and six), the ...
Jul 23, 2008 -
Re: SAA: Sexually Abused Anonymous: A Memoir
As another victim of sexual abuse, I am very, very sorry for your experience. Sexual abuse is an ugly thing, and can leave scars that are far too often permanent. ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: Lullaby
I love the rhythm to this piece! And I think the line breaks are ok, but I might vary them up a bit- it's such beautiful language that you don't ...
Jul 22, 2008
