shinobithief

Eww, toilet paper.

Thank you. The story behind the title "Hairs" is that once my gym teacher came into class and told us he got a hairs cut. Then he continued to tell ...

Thank you! It's really great to hear that you liked my poem!

Thanks

Thank you! I might make a few changes, but we'll see....

Thank you! I will think about that. It is a valid opinion.

Oh! That's perfect! I will use that, thank you.

Thank you for the review! I'm not sure what to replace "it" with, do you have any suggestions?

Thank you!

Thank you for the correction. I will think about how to change those parts.

Thank you for the nitpick. I had was unsure of how to spell delirious, hence the mistake. I will work on making it longer. Thank you for making that recommendation. ...