shieldmaiden

Me too :)

Gee thanks! Do you have any of your own chapters finished for me to read?

Thanks Honora! And thanks for taking time to review this chapter! All the things that you gave your opinion on I agree heartily with you and really appreciate your suggestions ...

Hey Phoenix! Thanks for the wonderful and fabulous review. So encouraging as always. With regard to the two "its" that you spotted, they are supposed to be written that way ...

Oh wow! I'm so glad you like it and really flattered. Thanks for all the likes and the encouraging comment. It made my day! :)

Aw, thanks! :)

No, you're not silly. I just didn't describe it clearly. I shall fix that in the future. :)

Thanks Phoenix. No Kkachi did not get wet 'cause she was taking a route down the cliff away from the waterfall. So she fell close to it, but along its ...

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Thanks as always, Phoenix. I love you thought provoking predictions. They make me more aware of what I should address in the future, or what to take out as unnecessary. ...

That'd be great! I'll be looking for them!

Thanks Phoenix for the helpful review. I most definitely would not have caught those mistakes if it wasn't for you. Your so helpful as always! :) I'm glad that you ...

Gee thanks :)

Thanks very much Q for the great tips. I would have loved to go into greater depth and now that you've added such great insight I dying to continue the ...

Thanks very much, Corvus, for your excellent constructive critique. I find it very helpful. I'm glad that you enjoyed reading it.