shieldmaiden

Wait - another's presence in the room? What's that supposed to mean!? Why do you keep ending things like this? They are as bad as cliffhangers. Love this chapter! Really ...

Thanks Phoenix for your fabulous, fantastic review. Thanks for catching all those errors. It's very encouraging having someone spot them for me, even more so that they are only grammatical ...

I hoped that you'd like it! :)

Ha ha! Poor, sad person that has to hide in the attic! I feel your pain! :)

Thanks! And thanks for pointing out that error. You are right and I will fix that. I'm glad you are still reading my work after all this time. You are ...

I'm glad you like it. You flatter me so much by reading it (even though you aren't supposed to). ;) You are so smart, too! I'm glad that you noticed ...

Hey Dossereana! Thanks for the review and the tips on how to make it better. I let my imagination go wild for this poem and didn't keep to the picture. ...

Hey Zami! Thanks for the tips. This is only the second poem I've written all my life. The first is in my book, but I haven't posted that chapter yet ...

Thanks Pan for the review! I'm glad that you enjoyed it and thanks for the tips about description. If you ever do go back and read my earlier chapters my ...

Ha ha! Yep I began with "the next morning" again. Reason it was already posted when you gave me the great advice. Luckily I don't have to change anything with ...

Hey there. Thanks for pointing out how I start each chapter the same. I didn't catch that and now I'll be able to fix it in the future. About the ...

That makes sense.

Thanks! :)

Hey Honora! Thanks for reviewing this and a big thank you for pointing out how I never addressed where they actually were fighting. I totally forgot that as I got ...

Did that. Would you like me to continue to tag you for each chapter? Thanks for asking to be tagged! I'm super duper flattered!