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Thanks for the review! The thing with Exliana is that I'm trying not to compromise her character (sort of the stereotypical hot-headed fire user), but your comments on her arrogance ...

Thanks for the review! I'll definitely keep your comments on mind. As for the worldbuilding comment... This is the sixth chapter of my novel, so it may be better understood ...

Thanks for the review! That first sentence, by the way, was a typo. "Hate" was supposed to be "that". Whoops. Anyways, I'll be sure to keep those comments in mind ...

Thanks for the comments! I really hated just about everything in this chapter, so your comments are doubly as helpful. Also whoops, I'm still getting Luatia's name wrong. I've heard ...

Thanks for the comment! If I could have done this differently, I would have done of this backstory in a chapter before the competition, but too late for that. *shrug* ...

Thanks for the review! Jeez, you're quick. I changed the warm sensation to burning sensations, as per your suggestion. And that tense change was cause I was stupidly role-playing in ...

Thanks for the review! I've got an idea for how to make the battle less confusing, which I've noted for another draft in the future. As for why Navarre chose ...

Thanks for the review! As for your question of whether there are normal people in this world, yes, there are people without magic and there are people with very limited ...

Thanks for the review! I'll keep your comments on mind while working on the next chapter! (Also yes, Navarre is in this competition, as you'll learn.)

Thanks for the review! I'm currently writing up the next chapter, and I'm keeping your review in mind as I do. :) I'm also reading that article, which so far ...

Thanks for the review! For the second draft, I will most definitely start with the flashback part, and have it not be a flashback. XD Definitely gonna be using the ...

Thanks for the review! I'll definitely be sure to take your comments into account when I write the next chapter!

Oh... I thought the difference of gender between the two characters would make the difference in character more noticeable. I'll keep that in mind in the future.

Thanks for the review! I shall most certainly come back to this review for future chapters and drafts, especially the first several comments. (Such as description. Oh, boy do I ...

Thanks for the review! I'll definitely be keeping your suggestions in mind while writing the next few chapters. :) I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter more than the prologue, and ...