sherineahmed

thnx alot for the advice

thanx guys :) you really made me happy with your replies thanx a lot

thnx for the helpful remarks but this was written by my sister ( insists on getting into other people private business).

She was broken. It had happened gradually, i feel you better start with: She said she was broken, and so broken she became. and cancel the other part it will ...

great work, i felt you explained how the character feel in an excellent way.